I am from the sky, I'm on top of the throne
Life is a monster, so I stay in my zone
I see so much potential, I wish to be better
I am from the stars above mars watch me fly into forever
I am from my dreams, I continue to believe
There is nothing in this world I couldn't achieve
But I'm stuck in between the lines of amazing and average
I'm a beast chasing down my dreams; they say I'm a savage
I am from your hopes, I encourage your beliefs
Never give up, negativity deceased
Love is a disease, I just caught the strand
She is the balance to my life like a powerbalance band
Music is the key, open the door
Look into my soul, ready to be explored
-Azey
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ReplyDeleteI love how your piece is very broad and non specific. You leave the concrete details out. This creates a great opportunity for the reader not only to relate, but to also think about what you meant.
-meghan
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ReplyDeleteI love how your piece is very broad and non specific. You leave the concrete details out. This creates a great opportunity for the reader not only to relate, but to also think about what you meant.
-meghan
I definitely feel like this could be put into a song and heard on the radio! I really like your lines, "I see so much potential, I wish to be better" And "I am from your hopes, I encourage your beliefs" Overall this whole thing is really good!
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure what words could describe this poem besides for the poem itself. The message I got from it is to just go out there and live life. Let others encourage you so you can encourage others.
ReplyDeletehello azey.
ReplyDeletei like how this poem you don't lose your peom's meaning when you rhyme. many people tend to get lost in finding a word that sounds like the previous, but really good job! i can picture you rapping to this (:
-kelsey
Your use of rhyme in this poem completes the thought that flows throughout this piece. It is effective in grasping the reader's attention.
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